Request Feedback on "Funny" Gaming Video!

[Rizky]

Hi! I made this and I'm looking for feedback! Hope you guys can tell me if you like it.

 

[TheSlothEmperor]

Great video in all, but I noticed there are some parts where you and your friends are silent. This used to happen to me as well when I used to make league content, what I found is you need to try and cut out the parts where there is a bit of silence just to stop viewer abandonment.

 

[Newname media]

Not review but that editing.. god it was lovely..