Couple of things:
1. I played no part in the creation of the hook or the instrumental however I did write and perform all of the rap
2. I am 15 years old, have little experience when it comes to the production of music and I can't afford amazing kit so I just work with what I have, it may not compare to most hip hop raps but it is the best I can do and one of the first raps I have actually put time into producing
3. Any feedback would highly be appreciated XD
RAP: https://soundcloud.com/user-517605463/emotional-rap-all-thats-left
Lyrics: (wrote them all on my own, if any lyrics sound similar to ones you have heard it is purely coincidental)
[Hook]
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left.. of you and I
[Verse]
I just got one question,
how could you let your prize go,
I thought we had something special,
but I guess i'll never know,
never know what is real,
never know what how I feel,
I thought I felt something good,
but I guess I didn't feel,
like man,
I tried my very best,
gave you all I had,
until the oxygen I breathed was the only thing that's left,
but you still took it anyway,
you took my breath away,
spat in my face and went astray,
and moved on the next day,
you used me for joke,
and the rent you couldn't pay,
you used me again and again,
then made me go away,
but on your next attack,
I would start to worry,
for someone with two faces they are both pretty ugly,
both pretty bad,
and even when you were trying your best,
it's the worst attempts I have had,
yeah,
It's the worst i've ever had
[Hook]
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left,
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left
[Verse]
I just don't get you,
I just wanted to belong,
I thought you were the one,
but I was,
very wrong,
I just want to let you know,
and unload my mental pain,
and you just rolled the dice,
in this game of life,
but now it's my turn,
so are you happy with your move?
did you pick the path you want to take?
because,
now it's my turn to choose,
and i'm ready to take the win,
because you deserve to loose,
yes you do,
yes you do,
yes you really do,
I don't know what I did to get you,
to deserve someone that would be,
so ******* spiteful,
and so cold,
how could I let you?
how could I let you use me like you did,
how could I let you treat me like you did,
I don't really know,
but I guess I really did
I don't know why,
but try,
my very best every single day,
I try to make things better,
but the pain won't go away,
and are you proud of what you did,
are you happy with what you achieved,
you watch me get put through torture,
and I just watch you leave!
[Hook]
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left,
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left
[Verse]
I just wanted to make you mine,
but you really weren't that kind,
gave you every single thing I had,
even my breath but then I took it back,
and I don't really know what will happen next,
but don't come looking for forgiveness,
because the pain that you created,
is all thats left!
[Hook]
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left,
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left[DOUBLEPOST=1494141640][/DOUBLEPOST]@EmperorFun
1. I played no part in the creation of the hook or the instrumental however I did write and perform all of the rap
2. I am 15 years old, have little experience when it comes to the production of music and I can't afford amazing kit so I just work with what I have, it may not compare to most hip hop raps but it is the best I can do and one of the first raps I have actually put time into producing
3. Any feedback would highly be appreciated XD
RAP: https://soundcloud.com/user-517605463/emotional-rap-all-thats-left
Lyrics: (wrote them all on my own, if any lyrics sound similar to ones you have heard it is purely coincidental)
[Hook]
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left.. of you and I
[Verse]
I just got one question,
how could you let your prize go,
I thought we had something special,
but I guess i'll never know,
never know what is real,
never know what how I feel,
I thought I felt something good,
but I guess I didn't feel,
like man,
I tried my very best,
gave you all I had,
until the oxygen I breathed was the only thing that's left,
but you still took it anyway,
you took my breath away,
spat in my face and went astray,
and moved on the next day,
you used me for joke,
and the rent you couldn't pay,
you used me again and again,
then made me go away,
but on your next attack,
I would start to worry,
for someone with two faces they are both pretty ugly,
both pretty bad,
and even when you were trying your best,
it's the worst attempts I have had,
yeah,
It's the worst i've ever had
[Hook]
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left,
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left
[Verse]
I just don't get you,
I just wanted to belong,
I thought you were the one,
but I was,
very wrong,
I just want to let you know,
and unload my mental pain,
and you just rolled the dice,
in this game of life,
but now it's my turn,
so are you happy with your move?
did you pick the path you want to take?
because,
now it's my turn to choose,
and i'm ready to take the win,
because you deserve to loose,
yes you do,
yes you do,
yes you really do,
I don't know what I did to get you,
to deserve someone that would be,
so ******* spiteful,
and so cold,
how could I let you?
how could I let you use me like you did,
how could I let you treat me like you did,
I don't really know,
but I guess I really did
I don't know why,
but try,
my very best every single day,
I try to make things better,
but the pain won't go away,
and are you proud of what you did,
are you happy with what you achieved,
you watch me get put through torture,
and I just watch you leave!
[Hook]
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left,
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left
[Verse]
I just wanted to make you mine,
but you really weren't that kind,
gave you every single thing I had,
even my breath but then I took it back,
and I don't really know what will happen next,
but don't come looking for forgiveness,
because the pain that you created,
is all thats left!
[Hook]
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left,
dont make it hard,
or pretend,
please amend it,
all thats left[DOUBLEPOST=1494141640][/DOUBLEPOST]@EmperorFun
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