Request Requesting feedback for new channel

[TheJackPlayer]

Hello! My name is TheJackPlayer, and im requesting feedback on my new channel. I just made channel arts, and the first video i made thumbnail, is HEARHTSONE: Tavern Brawl #1. Soon i will be using microphone on my videos. I now that my channel art isnt that great, so i need feedback so i can improve it.

My uploading schedule:
Monday: Random game
Wednesday: csgo
Friday: Random game
Sunday: Hearthstone tavern brawl

I'm trying to stay on the schedule, but sometimes its not possible. I dont have enough time to record and edit, or my internet connection is too slow.

Heres my latest video:

Heres a link to my channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCpBTLTfxxzMUR7CIGyV8pow

 

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What i

Liked:
Good game choise ++
no intro +

Disliked:
No channel trailer --
You really need to get a mic. --

What needs to be

Improved:
Dont be afraid to to put your voice on youtube.

Removed:
Nothing.

Channel art/branding:
simple nice channel art. but you need thumb nails.

Ps. you're just really after starting. take your time and get in the swing of it!


Hope this helps
Need anymore just ask!